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You made me disgust me;
With all the pain you gave me;
Sent me to the depths of hell and back;
You lied to me and left me to bleed
You gave me this hate
Do you see, it was my life

You ask me if I am sorry
Why would I be
You gave tenderness to my spirit
These tears or from our fight
And because of you
I have sung this for too long
And keep in mind, I loved you

You kicked me;
Left me behind;
I was left to squander and die;
Why did you do this to me;
See what you made me be;
Do you hurt too;
After all, I loved you.

After all you put me through
You still ask me to forgive you
All of them wasted nights
Of you manipulating my mind
Why do you choose this
What did I do to you
I tried hard to proved that I loved you.
©2009 ~paladen
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Author's Comments

Haha actually this is a emo poem if you have not previously noticed. Made it back in April/May when I was going through a hard time.

Its inspired by the song "Black Dahlie" by Hollywood Undead.

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Come Closer
Let Me Draw You In
Just A Tad Bit Closer
Then It'll All Begin

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